✍️ Задание 37. Как выглядит письмо на максимум?

В прошлом посте разобрали ошибки. Теперь показываю, как то же письмо звучит после исправления.

❌ Было:

Dear Sophia,
Thank you for your letter. I was really happy to get it.
In your email you asked me about Victory day. This event is commemorate with World War 2. On this day we celebrate the end of the war. There are lots of exciting events, but the most popular are military parades, firework displays and wreath-laying. My family and I usually go to the military parade to the Red Square.
But now tell me more about volunteer group. Do you like it? How did you find it? Did you made any friends there?
I don't have any time now and I need to go. Write back soon!
Best wishes,
Andrew

✅ Стало:

Dear Sophia,
Thank you for your letter. I was really happy to get it.
In your email you asked me about Victory Day. This event commemorates World War II. On this day we celebrate the end of the war. There are lots of exciting events, but the most popular are military parades, firework displays and wreath-laying. My family and I usually go to the military parade on Red Square.
But now tell me more about the volunteer group. Do you like it? How did you find it? Did you make any friends there?
I don't have any time now and I need to go. Write back soon!
Best wishes,
Andrew

Что изменилось:
👉 commemorate with - commemorates
👉 Victory day - Victory Day
👉 to the Red Square - on Red Square
👉 volunteer group - the volunteer group
👉 Did you made - Did you make
👉 World War 2 - World War II

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